Poetic Thurdays: In your presence

This poem was written sometime in th 2010 and i want to share it with you.Let me hear your thoughts on it.

IN YOUR PRESENCE

I'm helpless in your arms

Lost in your smile

I drown in your eyes

Weak in the knees from your kisses

I melt like a candle wax in your touches

My body shivers from d sound of your voice

I simply turn to water in your presence

Calm

Pellucid

And take any shape you want me to