Thursday, November 8, 2012

Poetic Thursday: Wrong Place...Wrong time

Hey people,i'm about to let you have a fill of my shortest poem yet.I wrote it and actually really liked it.It's very short but quite expressive.Enjoy!


Wrong place,wrong time

I smiled

She frowned

I waved

She looked away

I moved closer

She shifted

I said hi

She walked away

I guess i was just at the wrong place at the wrong time

30 comments:

  1. I am analyzing form different angles;

    Friendship; not all friendship are meant to be.
    Mis-undertood: some actions and thoughts mis-interpreted by people.
    Literally, we get into trouble for just been at a place at the wrong time!

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    1. Now i know why your husband called you 'intelligent'.

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  2. Nah Bro...she was just tripping...

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  3. True or maybe she was staring but wasn't staring at you..*I do that sometimes*

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  4. It depends? Was she Nigerian? In Naija? She might have just been fronting o lol

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    1. Hahahaha Forming is also a possibility.

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  5. hahaha, I think by the third opposites one should count their teeth with their tongue as they say.

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  6. hehe kinda cute...girl gotta play a little lol

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    1. Cute? She walked out! LOL

      We missed you o! Hope you're back?

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  7. She probably had a lot on her mind or maybe na fronting level as per Naija babe

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  8. hahaha..............serious things.
    You can always try again

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  9. The babe no get your time joor

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  10. E de happen... Na small tin my broda.

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