Monday, May 23, 2011

My Shortest Poem

There came a time when i was on a poem high.I mean,wrote poems almost everyday and sometimes i write as much as three poems in a day.It was during that period that i wrote my shortest poem yet.It is actually one of my favs because it's short and simple.Hope you like it;


WRONG PLACE AT THE WRONG TIME
I stood
She shifted
I smiled
She frowned
I said hi
She walked away
I guess i was just at the wrong place at the wrong time

17 comments:

  1. Lol!! Or maybe even in the right place at the wrong time. Try again lol. It's nice- like those short Chinese poems (i forget what they're called)

    Adiya

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  2. auuuw short but makes a lot of sense .. i like though

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  3. Ahh, you didnt activate Naija guy sharp mode - Never give up try Modus operandi #2. LOL

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  4. @The Corner Shop: Try again? I've not even tried yet!

    @Chizy K: Thanks alot Chizy and welcome back again!

    @P.E.T Projects: If it happens to me,i'll activate my Naija guy sharp mode.

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  5. don't dull oh lol
    Maybe she was having a bad day :P
    Nice, I like!

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  6. hehe i like ...short, simple and yet meaningful

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  7. Lol she wasnt feeling you at all :/
    nice poem :)

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  8. @Ms.Yellow Sisi Unspoken: Thanks dear!

    @Kitkat: Me? That wasn't me! Thanks all thesame.

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  9. i'd love for you to write a haiku lol

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  10. @LadyNgo: I might consider that! LOL

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  11. LOl, that got me cracking up! Sowwiee, try again or maybe try another :)

    http://msjanylbenyl.blogspot.com/

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  12. @MsJB: Ok,i'll tell my imagination that cos that was a scenario from my imagination.

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  13. lol... wrong time indeed mister!

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